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Aorta.........Haiku
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Aorta * Aorta passions Restless stream through springy veins Roots of nature’s wealth Charisma ~*TMP*~ 28/08/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 08-28-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Charisma, what a wonderful haiku you wrote here, for even without the pic I could see the image. Thanks, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ This is brilliant ! ! You a-orta do more of these !  I just love you to pieces~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- This is lovely!  You do these wonderfully! Love the graphic too! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely poem and graphic!!! Exciting image and statement! |
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ramrog Member
since 2001-08-22
Posts 50 |
nicely done again. Haiku seems like one of the harder forms to me. I'm envious. hehe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Titia: thank you for your kind reply Marge: Thank you beautiful lady, and I'll try to a-orto some more  Vicky: thank you for the lovely my friend, glad that you like it, and I like the picture too, this one comes from passions galeries Vas: thank you, and glad you view the exciting within ramrog: try and you'll find out that this form can give you much of pleasure. I thought the same about a year ago, as passions learned me to be creative with words. ...and these forums are great to practice...so I will look out for your haiku! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chrisma, You and your haiku are both loved. *L* Sy |
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