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Wherever you've been(Come back to me)
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Wherever you've been(Come back to me) |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Out there somewhere you hide from me Love's not strong enough to make you remember me You fly high forgetting all that's worth while Returning always within me to the place that you belong Here in my arms regardless of where you've been In my dreams we make love trying to erase all the pain brought on by another's touch. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh the hurt of seeing one you love in the arms of another! The feelings of pain well presented here Walker! Good write!! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
How wounding this is. You express so well the suffering of love cut short by another. I hope things take a turn for the better. Sincerely, Regina |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walker~ 'Love's not strong enough to make you remember me' That's just downright sad~ Beautiful, but sad~ *sniff* *sniff* *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Powerful sentiments Walker, you've captured this difficult situation well through your phrasing, very nicely done.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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RoseThorn New Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 5US - NY |
... i know exactly how that feels... your writing brings out emotion. very well done. ~Every Rose Has It's Thorn....~ |
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