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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2001-08-27 09:15 PM


Somewhere out there you are silent,
Holding faith in distance
While here his heart lies in your hands.
Just be careful is all I ask.
Wherever you are while the moon rises nightly
Surrounding his love and you in lonliness.
Somewhere out there you are silent,
And yet I hear both your hearts screaming
While love is paused for a moment of hope.
You are silent
He is silent.
Wherever you are
Please return with his heart
And keep it safe.
That is all I ask.



I am many.

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1 posted 2001-08-27 09:18 PM


this is so beautiful  
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2 posted 2001-08-27 09:19 PM


truly a wonderful wish for a friend that you obviously care very much for. . . I hope that your prayer is heard if it is real. . . and that his heart is returned to him soon. . .

well done. . . very special and heartfelt. . .

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3 posted 2001-08-29 12:38 PM


And you needn't ask more.  This is lovely  

Michael

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Tracey
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4 posted 2001-08-29 05:27 PM


I'm new here, but I just wanted to say I think this is lovely. If only all our long lost loves thought like this.
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5 posted 2001-08-29 07:51 PM


I can feel your love, and sadness. Nice work.
Sandra

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