Open Poetry #15 |
Thoughts Of You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I sit alone I watch the sun It seems to smile on everyone How warm the sand beneath my feet The waves they lap as if to greet Such beauty all around I see So amazing that it's all for free The sun it seems to warm my heart Not easy will it be to part So alone I feel without you here My love for you is always near Taken away before your time My heart seems lost as it does pine I see you as I walk these sands As I remember so fondly your warming hands What I'd give to see you once again My heart would shine and start to sing How comforting for me to dream of you But my heart seems to have a different view It knows you won't come back to me It takes a while for me to see My love is strong and will always be Such precious times for you and me As I watch the sun sink oh so low The time wasn't right for you to go I live to face another day Knowing how you'd want it that way Time can't change and can't bring you back My memory is strong and right on track Thoughts of you will come and go In my heart you'll be safe with me I know The gulls take flight The moon is full I turn and walk up to the hill I stand and let the moon reflect On times we had - I'll never forget Sleep peacefully and think of me You're part of the moon the sun and the sea (Repost) This was the very first poem I ever wrote in February 2001. It was written about the great love I had for my father who was tragically taken from me in May 1999. My writing began after he died and it saddens me to think that he never got to read any of my work. This poem means so very much to me as it was written about someone so very special. Suetang |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is a beautiful poem filled with what seems to be a great mixture of emotions. I enjoyed it, and it should not be so far down the page already. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is a beautiful poem filled with what seems to be a great mixture of emotions. I enjoyed it, and it should not be so far down the page already. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Suetang, This is an absolutely beautiful tribute to your father. You made him very proud I am sure while he was alive, and I know he is looking over your shoulder in Heaven reading every precious word you write. Dawn |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Temptress Thank you so much for your lovely words. Dawn I am so very humbled by what you write and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I'm so touched Sue. I can't help but feel You are still bonding with each sunset and sunrise. Making everything more memorable, more priceless. I'm so honored you share with us. This experience of beauty gained through passing. It is a true token of your heart. Sincerely, Regina |
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