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Ava'sEden
Junior Member

since 2001-08-03

Posts 16
Far&Away

0 posted 2001-08-25 12:48 PM

All kinds
All sizes
All shapes
All stubbly and adorable
In early morning wake
Before they shave
If I could only just have coffee
With just one really nice one
And watch the sun rise up
And chat about the brilliance on the water.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-08-25 01:07 PM

I like the way that the water catches the rays just so. . . like when it splashes and creates that rainbow effect. . .

welcome. . . I think that you'll find a lot of us wish for that. . . please, take a look around. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-08-25 02:00 PM

Well if you find two by the water (remember me

I hope you will have a look around in the other forums available to you here, we have a lot of fun! See you around.

~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-08-25 02:56 PM

Wow! Welcome!

I have to admit, I'd stayed away because I thought this might be a nagative thing about men...I'm so glad I came in! It's wonderful and I know just how you feel. A lovely dream to consider; a wonderful way to start a day!
(yes, I mean to leave it 'nag'ative, heh heh heh)

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2001-08-26 08:26 AM

Sometimes I wonder just why it is that they're so darned cute - Just to drive us mad, no doubt... Welcome to Passions - This is a great place - You're going to love it here - Check your email for a special greeting...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-08-26 08:28 AM

Welcome to Passions! You're going to fit right in....

Kay Vibbert
Junior Member

since 2001-08-25

Posts 35
Indiana

6 posted 2001-08-26 02:23 PM

Welcome, this is nice, really nice.

"It's not gossip unless I tell it to somebody else!" Lucy Ricardo

Kay (aka/Irish Rose)

Ava'sEden
Junior Member

since 2001-08-03

Posts 16
Far&Away

7 posted 2001-08-26 04:10 PM

Thank you for such a warm acceptance. I was encouraged to post this by my friend Regina.
I don't have much to offer, as I can barely type. I've been reading you guys for a while. But my typing was so bad I was too shy to reply. I have been practicing for weeks, so I will try to let you all know I love your beautiful words. Not too late to learn. Thank you!

Sven, that's what I'm talking about!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-08-26 04:19 PM

Welcome to passions....and I like your entrance, don't worry about typing...glad you find courage to post this one.

Charisma

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-08-26 04:24 PM

I was thinking this poem could have easily been titled "Women". Would have to change the beard part to makeup or something...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-08-26 04:36 PM

Ava'sEden~
Welcome to Passions~
I am so pleased the Regina encouraged you to join our circle~

Tee-Hee !
The MORE you type ... the easier it gets~
You'll see .....

Thanks for being here~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Ava'sEden
Junior Member

since 2001-08-03

Posts 16
Far&Away

11 posted 2001-08-26 04:36 PM

I'm so tickled by your reply James. I'm reading that way now, and it is so cute. Just like you.

I'm trying really hard Marge. You have made it seem so easy. Love your work!

Ava~

[This message has been edited by Ava'sEden (edited 08-26-2001).]

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

12 posted 2001-08-26 05:48 PM

A very wonderful first post!. And she says she can't write. Now I just have to get her to get her own computer, as she and I have been working on this at my house over coffee and my shoulder. Now she knows why the phone is busy when she tries to call. Much applause for her on this little ditty! She makes my heart smile!

Sincerely,
Regina

citizenx
Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 189
motorcade

13 posted 2001-08-26 06:13 PM

I was excepting to see a small bit of gender bashing, glad to see you found one of the true breed of men the kind that are sensitive and warm. Ava, really enjoyed the poem.

"the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned
the order of the soul" leonard cohen

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2001-08-26 07:02 PM

Ava this is wonderful and romantic and your poetic name is lovely...as are your replies...I have seen some of them today...
dont be shy...we are all as one here...
Welcome to Poetry Land.
take care
jm

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

15 posted 2001-08-26 08:19 PM

Welcome timid one. No one can see your typing speed only the beautiful end results.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

16 posted 2001-08-26 10:29 PM

Ah don't we all wish

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.

Snooganzmeister32
Member

since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

17 posted 2001-08-26 10:45 PM

We all want to do that ^^ It was a lovely write, hun *huggles*

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

18 posted 2001-08-26 10:51 PM

wonderful first post! Good for you for getting the courage to post it

I hope you post more! Don't worry about the typing...practice makes perfect right? And this is the best bunch of people to practice with

Hugs to you and WELCOME!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

19 posted 2001-08-27 08:32 AM

Welcome!! Very nicely done..and I do look forward to reading more of your efforts. As for the poem..I very nice!!

Imagery captured in the few words carries the reader into the picture, letting us see the different types of men and finally a hot cup of coffee shared as water's reflections ( and perhaps others) are shared... I enjoyed!

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

20 posted 2001-08-28 03:13 AM

It seems I am late in welcoming you and telling you what a simply delicate poem this is. It makes me wish for such a wonderful thing.

I hope you enjoy it around here.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

21 posted 2001-08-28 03:13 AM

It seems I am late in welcoming you and telling you what a simply delicate poem this is. It makes me wish for such a wonderful thing.

I hope you enjoy it around here.

Ava'sEden
Junior Member

since 2001-08-03

Posts 16
Far&Away

22 posted 2001-08-28 07:17 AM

Wow! My e-mail has never been so full of such wonderful reception. Thank you so much!
Each of you for welcoming me among you. I'm so thrilled!

Ava~

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