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The second kiss
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The second kiss |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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The Second Kiss ~*~ It only took a second a quick peck on the lips yet lingers the taste I can't forget distance seperates yet I await my second kiss from lingering lips you my love are sorely missed BloomingRose |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Deb...how soft...how sure...hope he comes back soon... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
In moments like this we hope the other is thinking the same thoughts...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yet lingers the taste I can't forget distance seperates yet I await my second kiss ================== a delicate lovely impression this leaves behind. beautiful write of longing poetess Rose  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ 'yet lingers the taste I can't forget' I'll bet he can't forget it either ! !  He'll be back for seconds ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done. . . they say that the second time is always better. . . great job. . . short and sweet. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I truly understand the sentiments for another you have expressed here. Dawn |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes I know what you mean....."yet lingers the taste" I feel the same way on the other side of the coin....very well done!! |
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