»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #15
»
Blood-let
| Open Poetry #15 |
|
Blood-let |
|
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
|
a lick of lips before a kiss... I try to follow in foot's lead, all my solitude--unbleed or just bring me to where you are, Give me hand to place on breast-- feel this pounding in my chest. enough to bring me to my knees. Give me hand to place on breast-- I promise--I will do the rest. let fingers linger in regret. Learn to dance, with me, forget-- Like medicine of a blood-let... |
||
| © Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew! You don't know how fortunate you are that you're a long way away from me.... Being a red blooded healthy North American male words like linger, breast, hand and so on kind of gets me excited....Oh well, sorry, I shouldn't take away from the clever composition of this poem.....Great writing Celeste! "Just the thought of you in me enough to bring me to my knees. Give me hand to place on breast-- I promise--I will do the rest." Ummm!, cough, stutter, stumble, flushed, sweat, breathe heavy, images galore... oh oh sorry! There I go again! |
||
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Going to have to agree with Ethome... reactions are what they are..and this is sensual in its phrasing and word useage.. nice work... I enjoyed!! |
||
|
shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wonderfully sensual and enticing,Great write. Throw your heart out in front of you And run out to catch it. ARAB PROVERB [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 08-27-2001).] |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
HOW do you do this? Each time I read your work, I am more in awe. And I agree with the others, this is so hot, it almost sizzles.. Sandra |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Give me shuttle to the stars or just bring me to where you are, Give me hand to place on breast-- feel this pounding in my chest. Just the thought of you in me enough to bring me to my knees. Give me hand to place on breast-- I promise--I will do the rest. Say that it's not over yet; let fingers linger in regret. ================================ these images and emotions are engraved on me..god how well I know....... I can still feel the impress of the hand, still feel the fingers laced...... needless to say I feel every word of this. beautiful sen..... you bleed beautiful me twin... hearthugs me |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem radiates a sensual mood...James |
||
|
Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Truly an Eros filled piece. Wonderful. Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ok. . . really playing around with this one aren't you??  it just leaps off the page and begs to be read. . . well done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
was so caught up in butterfly memories and this beauty I forgot to put in me library |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ethome? what you call my good fortune I have to consider my bad luck! Thank you for reading, as always you make me smile....and wonder!  CH---I've already been having way too much fun! My gratitude to you as well. Thanks to shadow for reading as well--I do so enjoy being enjoyed...  Sandra? aw shucks..'tain't nothin' but a little lust...okay...so it's ALOTTA lust... thanks lovely, lady! secret whisper...speak up, will ya? Thanks for reading! James Michael--I'm glad I could return the favor...thanks m'friend, for all the lovely verse YOU have written! Sven...now how could I leave YOU out? Thanks as always for your kindness...and OH...damn...HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!!!! Janet? I KNEW you'd understand---and yep, talked to "him" the other day, and if I were a better person, his happiness wouldn't have bothered me so much!  HUGS as always and thank you for being here for me---AGAIN. Now everybody, go out there and writhe something---OMG...I mean WRITE something---OF COURSE!  Thanks all! |
||
Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
You know that blood letting was pretty much just an excuse to watch blood trickle down your beautiful skin, don't you? *grins* I might like to watch that sometime. |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers. Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee  |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
