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Finding ecstasy in the night
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Finding ecstasy in the night |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The night seduces you it lures you into unknown territory Dragging you along darkness smoke and liqueur Lights hypnotize you dancing seductively around you to rhythms of desire In the dense crowd sweating bodies never look so good They take you by the hand cornering you with passion Losing yourself forgetting love embracing lust Finding ecstasy in the night. [This message has been edited by walker (edited 08-26-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah that's exactly the way it happens! Seems like the right thing at the time but it's like playing roulette! Great write Walker! I like to touch on these types of subjects from time to time! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Losing yourself forgetting love embracing lust Ya got that right...I, least of all, have no defense. |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Although I find it somewhat choppy, I still think the image was effectively conveyed. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
So very truly stated. Cool write here!  Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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