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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-08-26 05:47 PM


Fiber
Sweaters

Together
In
Winter breath

Slowly
Taking in
Magnificent
Ocean

Providing
A
Catharsis

Of
Love


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
cpalmer
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Phoenix, Az
1 posted 2001-08-26 05:49 PM


Mark,
You have such a way with words! Beautiful!
Cindi

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-08-26 05:54 PM


Thank you, Cindi...  it's all in the details...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
3 posted 2001-08-26 06:06 PM


How about a sweater built for two! I have one called Old Softy for me and Hubby.

Lovely Mark! A sharing heartbeat of verse.

Sincerely,
Regina

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
4 posted 2001-08-26 07:40 PM


I've never heard of that, Regina, but it sounds like a wonderful thing for two people in love...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2001-08-26 08:18 PM


What a unique point of view. The only problem I have with this poem is it is making me a little homesick for the parts of the California coast I really miss, like Morro Bay, where a cozy sweater makes an evening stroll comfortable.
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2001-08-26 09:35 PM


Nice picture painted here, Mark. Enjoyed, and could almost feel the ocean breeze
Sandra

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-08-27 02:01 AM


very cool...no pun intended  
love the imagery and vocab
the sweater was a clever detail to throw in.
well done poet sir of succinct  
jm

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