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Twenty or Less...#35 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Fiber Sweaters Together In Winter breath Slowly Taking in Magnificent Ocean Providing A Catharsis Of Love (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Mark, You have such a way with words! Beautiful! Cindi |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, Cindi... it's all in the details... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
How about a sweater built for two! I have one called Old Softy for me and Hubby. Lovely Mark! A sharing heartbeat of verse. Sincerely, Regina |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I've never heard of that, Regina, but it sounds like a wonderful thing for two people in love... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a unique point of view. The only problem I have with this poem is it is making me a little homesick for the parts of the California coast I really miss, like Morro Bay, where a cozy sweater makes an evening stroll comfortable. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice picture painted here, Mark. Enjoyed, and could almost feel the ocean breeze Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool...no pun intended  love the imagery and vocab the sweater was a clever detail to throw in. well done poet sir of succinct  jm |
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