navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #15 » Straight from your heart
Open Poetry #15
Post A Reply Post New Topic Straight from your heart Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-26 12:01 PM



Tell me
straight from your heart
Have anyone else capture your heart?
Let me be the first to hear it
Even if it breaks my heart
I need to know
if someone occupies
my spot
And if you lie
I'll be relieved
to hear what I want.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2001-08-26 12:17 PM


yes, tell me pretty lies, let me believe them, so my heart won't break......just yet.   very well done!  

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 08-27-2001).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-27 01:13 AM


Reminds me of the attorneys rule...never ask a question that you don't already know the answer to.
DawnG
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
3 posted 2001-08-27 11:33 PM


I'm not sure that I'd be relieved to hear a lie. But sometimes for some people I guess a little half truth would be good, but not sure if it would be for me.

                             Dawn

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #15 » Straight from your heart

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary