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Whiskered Kisses
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Whiskered Kisses |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Whiskered Kisses~  they say our love will never last but my commitment's unsurpassed opposites attract it's true and there's no doubt I'm drawn to you it matters not what people say I'll stay beside you come what may you're my catnip...I'm your cheese you make my heart skip...what a tease our love is here in black and white I care not if it's wrong or right they'll see that we're the perfect match I'll prove to them you're quite a catch what's that you say...you think I might in taste of you find sheer delight an offer such as this, my dear I can't resist, but have no fear though whiskered kisses soft and sweet are tempting me I shall not eat one such as you my rodent fair trust me please, I wouldn't dare come closer let me taste your lips and wrap my paws around your hips that's it...come on...move closer still I just can't wait to get my fill... burp! ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
this is so cute, makes me think of mismatched people and how they are happy in spite of what others think. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This needs to be submitted to a wonderful greeting card place!!! It's so cute, too cute for words. At first I thought it was going to be about an uncle's kisses, whiskered and all. Being a cat-person, it thrilled me no end. Could you try sending it and the pic to me e-mail so I could forward it to my daughter, she'd just love to read and see the pic. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Thank you for the light hearted verse. Please tell us the overwhelmed varmint survived the affair. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL  Delightful, Vicky! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Vicky, Very very cute  I truly enjoyed the poem and the chuckle it caused I'm so glad I stopped in  TaraB |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This is too funny! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehehe oh Vicky, I love it! And the title is just perfect thank you for the laugh! I'm keeping this one for future laughs as well!~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh...your such a tease... LOL what a great picture and once again you get your inspire from the most creative of places. keep em coming jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
oh vlraynes, this poem is such a darling...truly enjoyed, u've made my day!! thanks for sharing |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Dad-burn it ! This is the cutest little thing I've seen today !  You are so quick-witted with that great humor and rhyme~ You tickle me to pieces ! ! And that picture is a hoot ! ! Oh ... yeah ... could ya' do one about BIRDS ? LOL ! Love ya' gal~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
shadow of the fall- Thanks so much...glad you enjoyed this. VAS- Thank you for the kind words. I'd be happy to send you a link to this page, and you can then forward the link to your daughter. RSWells- Well..the condition of the 'varmint' is currently unknown...but the cat is quite large and healthy! LOL! Glad you enjoyed! Denise- Thanks much...glad this gave you a laugh. Rosepetals- So glad it gave you a chuckle. Thanks for stopping in. Duncan- Thank you...glad you like! SmittenKitten- So happy to know you'll be keeping this one handy. Thank you! Janet Marie- Just having fun, my friend. Glad you're joining me in the laughs. Hugs to you, sweet friend. cottage- So happy to know I've made your day! Glad you enjoyed this little piece of fun. Thanks much! Marge- LOL! I'm just having WAY too much fun with these silly rhymes! So glad you're sharing the giggles with me. By the way...you may not have to wait too much longer for that bird poem. I DO already have a graphic for that one! LOL! Love and hugs, sweet lady! hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky darling! this is too cute! 'your my catnip...I'm your cheese' I love it!!! You are having way too much fun lately...need to have you come watch my kids I think you have too much time on your hands...LOL Big Hugs!! Cindi |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Now Vicki, it wasn't quite supposed to end like that, now was it? Unless they were sharing a can of tidbits.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
teehee..what a funny character you are...  "youre my catnip, i'm your cheese"...LOL i sure am glad you started writing poetry again.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this truly was so much fun, and you are just getting too good at these Vicky. Marge ordered birds, well I am ordering racoons, as we sure have enough of them around this year. That was adorable, can't you send it to a card company or something? Too fun! If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay okay.......so it's not what I thought it was going to be but I have to admit that I sure got a chuckle out of it. So nice to see you throwing teases of poetic form to the wind and delighting us all. Much enjoyed there o' student of the teachings to come. Loved it. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful, I loved this one. Who's pulling who's tail? Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Tee hee! Girl, your humour rocks! I love it Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cindi- Thanks, my dear...glad you like it. Maybe I'll have to share these silly little ditties with your kids one of these days soon. love ya Lady In White- Ummmm...yeah....tidbits..that's it! LOL! Thanks for reading, my friend. dg- Me too! Really glad you're enjoying my silly side! Love and hugs Mysteria- Thanks much, my friend. Rachoons, huh? Hmmmmm...I'll see what I can do..LOL Haven't even filled Marge's bird order yet! Hugs to you Mark- Yep...I'm having a fun with this new silly muse I've found. Glad this gave you a chuckle! Hugs to you, my wise teacher. shadow974- I'll never tell! LOL! Glad you enjoyed! Melissa- Thanks much, my friend. Happy you're enjoying it! hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved it..~smiling ~Wynter |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
nakdthoughts- Thanks much..glad you enjoyed. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Great poem, loved the picture |
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Wes Utica Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 28California |
This is an extremely publishable poem. There are magazines for cat fanciers that would "eat it up." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is absolutely hilarious. And I do agree opposites do attract. Dawn |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is remarkable. Really. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kirksters- Thanks so much for giving this one a read. Glad you enjoyed it! Hugs to you.. Wes Utica- Wow! Thank you so much for that! I am familiar with the magazines you're referring to, but never thought of trying to publish a poem in one of them. You've made my day with such a wonderful compliment. Thanks for reading. Dawn- Thanks so much! Glad this gave you a chuckle! mirror man- Thank you! Really! hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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