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Open Poetry #15

gotta be strong

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2001-08-26 08:20 AM

my soul creaks audibly

heart pounding,
i look around
furtively,

hoping
no one
had noticed
this betrayal
of vulnerability

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-08-26 09:54 AM

indeed my friend. . .

well done. . .almost an epigram. . .

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-08-26 10:50 AM

Faterider,
Excellent.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-08-26 11:08 AM

beautifully done!

Charisma

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2001-08-26 11:34 AM

We are weak, but struggle to be strong. Love this one.

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

5 posted 2001-08-26 11:35 AM

Faterider,

Great Job!

Cindi

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