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0 posted 2001-08-25 09:03 PM


Torn Apart
By: Noah Eaton
8/25/01

I feel like time has left me freezing to the ground
Leaving me trapped between four walls
I wish I could fly away from here
And wander down these narrow dreamtime halls
But I've lost my wings
It's getting to the point where I've forgotten to fly
And all I do is fall

I'm torn apart
Can you help me?
I'm scared that I may never feel my heart
Ever feel free and glee
And in all this ceaseless bleeding
It's hard for me to leap...

I feel like deja vu comes back to me every day
All my tears take me nowhere
I feel like the space between me and the world
Expands every time I try and see what's over there
And I want to be free
It's getting to the point where I forget there's something more
And my hopes are outnumbered by despairs

I'm torn apart
Can you help me?
I'm scared that I may never feel my heart
Ever feel free and glee
And in all this ceaseless bleeding
It's hard for me to speak...

I hope that someday I can have the eyes to see
All that I want to see...
I hope that somehow I can find the words to say
All that I want to speak
Tomorrows always coming too soon
It's getting to the point where I can't keep track of time
Please don't leave me weeping

So if I was torn apart?
Would you help me?
I'm scared that I may never feel my heart
Ever feel free and glee
And in all this ceaseless bleeding
It's hard for me to think...

I need you
To help me through
To all the promises I never knew
I'll do the same
We'll foreordain
Hold my hand and show me the way
Time has slipped from me
In my misery
Help me renew...
Renew...
Renew...
Renew...

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-08-25 09:06 PM


                                          "I need you
                                      To help me through
                                 To all the promises I never knew
                                       I'll do the same
                                       We'll foreordain
                                Hold my hand and show me the way
                                   Time has slipped from me
                                        In my misery
                                       Help me renew...
                                         Renew...
                                         Renew...
                                         Renew..."

A very yearning emotional piece Noah!  Well done my friend!!

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2 posted 2001-08-26 04:46 PM


Heartfelt write.....and it touched me deeply......words straith from your heart.

One day you will see, all the things you want to see.....have faith my friend.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

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