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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-08-24 02:19 PM


Inhale me

My love
Overwhelms you

Your senses
Are screaming
With desire

Delicious transformation

Silky pressure
Building

Swimming

Melting


Calling


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)


"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-24 03:02 PM


Hey Mark.. another very nice write..like the sensual nature of this and the flow down page and across the minds Eye...

you have developed a real talent for these...
I certainly have enjoyed reading them all..


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-08-24 03:34 PM


Oh YES!! YES!! Loved it...all the way to the end....wishing it wouldn't...ever.. end.
*sigh*

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2001-08-24 03:42 PM


Ron, thank you once more for the positive feedback -- I'm still having fun in this developing style, for it is a great "go-between" to fill the gaps of my regular style.

Enchantress:  Then...  it was good for you? ;->

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-08-24 03:47 PM




Wow.....
Another beautiful write......

sensual and intense........

Thank you Mark.....
I'm gald we are enjoying your pieces again....

**********************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-08-24 04:14 PM


My Melody:  it's nice to share again, while I have a quick chance.  Thank you for the euphonous sentiments.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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6 posted 2001-08-24 04:38 PM



Is it warm in here?  Whew....

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-08-24 04:55 PM


My Lady -- one can't remain cold all the time, you know... ;->

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


rwood
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8 posted 2001-08-25 10:08 AM


Oh my. Smooth as Chocolate. Which is also an ingredient in many perfumes. This one lingers in craving!  

Sincerely,
Regina

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2001-08-25 11:12 AM


...a most ambrosial ingredient in perfume or food, I must say. ;->

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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10 posted 2001-08-26 07:11 AM


a good write...i hope you are not offended when i say that for a moment, i wondered how would "you" respond when "my" love is too overwhelming? Gag in disgust? or take it gallantly like a warrior??

Hee hee

MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2001-08-26 02:35 PM


Faterider, no offense taken, but I guess that would depend upon who "you" are...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-08-26 04:21 PM


Such a nice expression...James
MARK V SHELDON
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13 posted 2001-08-26 04:51 PM


Thanks, James.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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