Open Poetry #15 |
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Were You Only A Dream? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
You came to me as if in a dream You took my hand and sat with me as I allowed you to enter my life my heart and my soul Your heart listened while I spoke and you read between the lines of my grief my loneliness my sadness and my uncertainty You enveloped me in your arms as you took me under your wing and into your life into your confidence and into your heart And you loved me for simply being myself Never have I felt as safe as I feel right now no part did I have to play no person was I pretending to be No actor was required on this stage You saw the real me as I offered you residence within my soul You accepted all of me myself and I Suetang |
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Kay Vibbert Junior Member
since 2001-08-25
Posts 35Indiana |
pretty scary showing the real you! but wonderful when they love you anyway!
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sue, Beautiful...... this is great! Thank You |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Sue, This is just wonderful...baring your soul can be frightening but so worth it when it's accepted! you wrote this beautifully! ![]() Cindi |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
You know you've found someone special when you realize and can acknowledge the things described in this poem... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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