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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-25 08:37 PM


You came to me as if in a dream
You took my hand and sat with me
as I allowed you to enter
my life
my heart
and my soul

Your heart listened while I spoke
and you read between the lines
of my grief
my loneliness
my sadness
and my uncertainty

You enveloped me in your arms
as you took me under your wing and
into your life
into your confidence
and into your heart
And you loved me for simply being myself

Never have I felt as safe
as I feel right now
no part did I have to play
no person was I pretending to be
No actor was required on this stage
You saw the real me
as I offered you residence
within my soul
You accepted all of me myself and I

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Kay Vibbert
Junior Member
since 2001-08-25
Posts 35
Indiana
1 posted 2001-08-26 01:21 AM


pretty scary showing the real you! but wonderful when they love you anyway!


"It's not gossip unless I tell it to somebody else!"  Lucy Ricardo

Kay (aka/Irish Rose)

Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
2 posted 2001-08-26 11:03 AM


Sue,
Beautiful...... this is great!

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
3 posted 2001-08-26 11:49 AM


Sue,
This is just wonderful...baring your soul can be frightening but so worth it when it's accepted! you wrote this beautifully!  
Cindi

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
4 posted 2001-08-26 01:54 PM


You know you've found someone special when you realize and can acknowledge the things described in this poem...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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