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On The Other Side Of Loneliness
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On The Other Side Of Loneliness |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ On The Other Side Of Loneliness ~*~On the other side of loneliness, There's a safe haven just for me. Whenever I’m feeling lonely, I soul search down by the sea. As I walk along the path beneath, The branches swaying in the breeze, The sad song sung by the whistling wind, Somehow always puts my heart at ease. It whispers out my name so softly, Then seems to echo off a cloud. The sea spray embraces me in love, Wrapping me in its misty shroud. Above me, a violent, grey velvet sky, A holding tank of angel's tears and stars. Beneath me, effervescent sea spray washes, As I walk humming to the wind's 1,000 guitars. Moonbeams begin to dance among the clouds, Ribboning a bright kaleidoscope of color, Around me the silence becomes deafening, And still I sit there hour after hour. On the other side of loneliness, This place is peace and serenity for me, Where I allow myself to open up my heart, And just become one with the sea. As I see my footprints wash away, My face is again stained with tears, As on the other side of loneliness, I recall all the wasted years. art: Steve Hanks "Pacific Sanctuary" www.world-wide-art.com midi: www.dolphinsdreams.com Mysteria © 09/2000 Published in "Pictures Painted With Words On The Web" Skeeterville Press, June, 2001 [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 08-25-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
the last line hit hard into the holes inside my soul ----------- the image of becoming one with the sea and shore is beautiful.... a lovely, inwardly searching pensive piece |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Mysteria~ This is very pretty. The serenity of the sea in solitude washes over me~ Just lovely, sweet poetess~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Doreen ~ Hi, the last line is what actually causes a lot of the poetry I write, and I am sure many others  and you realize later in life that every second of life is precious to be enjoyed and not wasted. Thanks for reading this one.~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
 and you wrote the book.  Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Ok.... I don't get it, only part of my message came through on the last post... I said, and I repeat... That I've been there on the other side of loneliness... and that you dipped your poetic pen in the saline ocean mist and came up with a heartfelt write. Sharon you are one talented lady... Love and peace Maggie |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Absolutely beautiful! Melton |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Opps didn't catch you Marge, I am so glad you enjoyed this one. Flutterwings, I think I got my heart caught on the sleeve of yours? What a nice way to be connected, thank you. 2dalimit (love your name), and I thank you so much for reading and seeing some beauty today! ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, this is so exactly how this feels to me, also. Wonderful, lovely, perfect poem. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sharon ~ This really touched me, especially the last verse - wow! This is bittersweetly beautiful. In fact, I'm printing it out, boy, do I relate! Take care and hugs! Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
WOW! Beautifully done and those last few lines really tug at the heartstrings. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful work Mysteria! I always really enjoy the graphics you introduce your poems with. They're always so well chosen to set the mood! This is very well done work!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Catalina Moon ~ Melissa ~ Rascalx Sad but true that life passes us by so quickly and sometimes reflecting do we not wonder what we have done with the time? I started making a "happiness journal" and in it I try to put at least 3 things that day that made me happy or someone else - that way I know in some small way that day at least meant something to me or someone else. My girlfriend started hers 20 years ago, and at least she can count for her time, and it is never to late to start. Rambling - Thank you for liking this one and I appreciate you reading it.ethome ~ Your comment meant a lot to me, as I do try to make the "package" appealing to the mind, and eye at the same time. Thank you ever so much. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Mysteria What a wonderful piece of writing you have given us and how easily I can relate to each and every word. Much of my writing has been inspired by my love of the sea and nature. Take care.........Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sue ~ Yes your writings are of the sea and your garden (how's about a new garden one?) I love those, and thanks for reading. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wonderful write Mysteria, To have a special place to go is very soothing. Loved your poem Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Kay Vibbert Junior Member
since 2001-08-25
Posts 35Indiana |
Nothing should be wasted, that's a wonderful message, Sharon, nothing wasted. Kay |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sharon, this is something that sure hit me! I so can relate. A very beautiful write here! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Shadow974 ~ I am very lucky to be right by the ocean and it is my haven ~ Thank you for reading and enjoying. Kay ~ I am so glad you enjoyed this one, thank you. Saunni ~ Girl, you have no time to waste, you are a wonderful Mom and Wife, and that is a full time position and the best in the world! Thank you for reading this one and here's a hug for you too!~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
rascalx ~ Thank you for reading my poetry I appreciate it, and the trust always hurts doesn't it unfortunatley. Thanks again. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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