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Cpat Hair

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Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-08-24 09:04 AM

Ice creased
dredged dragging
of stone over stone
by layers of snow
never melting

rain pooled leavings
now collected eons later
offer relief to the few
that know where to look

Oasis
no palms or psalm sung
to these the scattered
tribes found

No longer they roam
but still the creases remain
to quench the wary throat

Dipping a hand
I taste the past

© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-08-24 09:06 AM

I hope the stream of memory was a good, long, cool, swallow....

I enjoyed this!

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2001-08-24 09:15 AM

We need only know where to look indeed - Enfolded in the crease of time. I enjoyed this muchly...

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

3 posted 2001-08-24 11:16 AM

So many never care to look - so their souls are never fed. This is beautiful and thought-provoking. I like it very much.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-08-24 11:23 AM

ah, yes, in the creases, in the folds lie memories profound

lovely piece

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2001-08-25 11:04 AM

Dipping a hand
I taist the past
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Great ending!

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

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