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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-08-23 03:47 PM

Hay from summer days
too hot for even civility to smile
now rests under us,
this blanket spread
for wine and cheese
the cushion against
prickling stems of day.

We fit together well
and lolled lazily,
connected as we were,
letting soft kisses
and the shaft of light
from long weathered boards
reflect off our souls

Plucking errant strands
of seasoned hay from damp hair
with the sea of your taste
lingering on my lips
I languished in cool air
and heated hearts

sweet smell of hay
still lingers on this loft
and I still come sit
thinking of your eyes
and the day you wanted me

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-08-23 03:49 PM

I think the summer season's been very good for you....

and the sweetness of this rivals the lingering sweetness of any hay...."let's make hay" takes on a whole new meaning....

whew...

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-23-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-08-23 03:54 PM

"Moo"-sic to my ears!!! (GROAN)

but sigh...let the danged cows look..only makes the milk a little sweeter!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-08-23 03:55 PM

You rascal, you

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-08-23 04:12 PM

CPatHair~
Ohhhhhhhhh, took me right back in a heartbeat
to that hayride I've never forgotten~

Very, very nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-08-23 04:24 PM

oh, oh, my...being wanted is such a wonderful feeling, recalling such a wondrous thing

I hear tell a 'roll in the hay' is quite a pleasure, so few lofts around today in the cities of your lives.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

6 posted 2001-08-23 04:35 PM

Lot's of romance in this.
A real summer delight to read.

Deb

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-08-23 05:00 PM

your title drew me in...your words held me..

very nice..one I wish to savor...
thank you, C

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2001-08-23 06:44 PM

Only you could pull this off.

poetsguild
Member

since 2001-08-12

Posts 85
Florida

9 posted 2001-08-23 06:48 PM

Enjoyed the story this told
and the way it was told.

Very nice work.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2001-08-25 10:41 AM

Ellie May in the Hay once again if she was smart! This is so warm and intoxicating. Those old barns hold many secrets.

Sincerely,
Regina

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

11 posted 2001-08-25 11:00 AM

Beautiful!!!!

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

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