Open Poetry #15 |
The Little Things |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Little Things With a bit and a bite I add this touch Of the much of the such and such Just a reminder of the things that be That most of the time just bothers me. Some times they are called the little things Those things that cling and ping and sing Those things that needle and wheedle our brain Those little things that drive us insane Like pick up this and make sure about that And make certain that you take out the cat. Go to the cleaners add that to your list And just do it without getting piss’t. It’s the little things that fill up my day That grow the forest that block my way It’s the little things that fill up my mind That stops my think and makes me blind. It’s the bits and pieces that fill up my bowl And rust the hinges of the door of my soul |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very cute - You just need a secretary, Sweet Sy... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just a reminder of the things that be That most of the time just bothers me. Some times they are called the little things Those things that cling and ping and sing Those things that needle and wheedle our brain Those little things that drive us insane ================================ It’s the little things that fill up my day That grow the forest that block my way It’s the little things that fill up my mind That stops my think and makes me blind. It’s the bits and pieces that fill up my bowl And rust the hinges of the door of my soul ================================= oooohh youre so cute when youre testy and cool and clever too... And you know Im diggin all this inner rhyme and wisdom divine. Oh...and Stinky..when youre putting out the cat...dont forget to put the dragon in his pen very cool poetic rant Sy-babes me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, My sweet would you like the job. JM, I do all that but like Nan said I need a secretary, Would you like the job. It pays in raspberry tea and fantasy. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderfully reminiscent of your poem "The Golden Key" so it accordingly becomes a keeper... and I've been told I'm a pretty good assistant! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll be your secretary ... I'll do your odds and ends To all the little details I will mend and tend I will run your errands I'll go to the store When you play golf I'll even keep score I'll take care of it all Dont you worry about a thing I'll even whistle while I work Heck...I'll even sing Just make sure to remember I dont work for free Keep the poetry coming and dont forget the tea Oh and I also expect a bonus Dont forget the *winkies* from the boss If I dont get me *winkies* I will get quite cross So thats the thick and thin of it Give me my *winkies* or I QUIT LOL *winkiewinkie* ps...I want a raise if I have to sweep up after dragons |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thanks for the offer, you are on the top of the list. *L* JM, Just sign with the fantasy pen and put in the date as to when? Love Ya Stinky Winkiewinkie. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--I like your whimsy it makes me smile! In the dew of little things, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hate to state, but I relate... the innate can grate, there's no debate, but is such fate? If you ate the bait, don't abate, contemplate or wait just let the rate of your gait dissipate the full plate before it's too late and the date becomes a blank slate... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Always glad to offer a smile. Mark, Reads like good advice. Enjoyed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
whimsey is so much fun yep, it's those little things that often keep the big things from gettin' done |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wonderfully written. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Thank you for the nice comment. Sue, Thank you for the read and response. |
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