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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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waiting patiently for some edification solace to my soul |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Perfection in this Senryu~ I'd say that's pretty 'enlightening'~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh how we do seek to know we matter a wonderfully eager heart has penned this for sure |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what a cool senryu... clever use of vocabulary, impact and succinctity well done SK |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done! edification is not a word seen often in poetry on this board...and you have woven it nicely into a meaningful piece... I enjoyed!! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Margie~ Perfection? Naaaaah....  but you've put a huge smile on my face! *hugs*VAS~ as usual, you understand....thank you JM~ I just love your replies thank you!Cpat Hair~ edification is a good word thank you for your kind words and enthusiasm!Hugs to all  |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
May your wait be brief, the solace complete. I like this very much. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
illusion~ thank you very kind sentiments...hugs to you! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Succinctly stated Instantly gratifying Minimalism -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Mark~ accurately put your description of senryu summed up in few words [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-24-2001).] |
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