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Open Poetry #15

Nothing Comes

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-08-24 06:20 AM

Nothing there,
No shadows hiding,
Just stale air.

I know nothing there,
I’ve nothing to do but watch
And breath the stale air.

Nothing comes,
Because nothings there,
The clock stopped at half past noon,
Taking sounds some where,
No meter for a lost tune,
Meager rhyme.

Nothing comes,
The room is shadows.
Even memories now fade,
The clock stopped at half past noon, it’s night,
Forgot the last dinner made,
Nothing at windows,
Not a shade.

Nothing comes,
And thus ends the day,
The clock becomes correct then,
Half the day away,
Nothing comes.

Nothing there,
No shadows hiding,
Just stale air.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-08-24 10:09 AM

'tis no meager rhyme that escapes from you...and yes, the air around here is rather stale...here meaning my here not passions...just in case *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-08-24 12:36 PM

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Just a few words tossed upon the page,
Pleased that you liked them.

Gloom

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-08-26 12:29 PM

words not tossed but carefully chosen. . .

well done. . . you convey your sense of feeling very well. . .

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