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Un-Spontaneous Remission
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Un-Spontaneous Remission |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Heartsick nigh unto my death visions of a past life dream crushed inanely as it left nothing slightly as it seemed. Feverish, cold chills control heart and body ache with fear pain which radiates from soul how could love be so unclear? Pieces left to kick around gradually re-form my life climbing slowly off the ground finding muse within the strife. Let forgetfullness fill me Otherwise I'll not be free. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Here's to joy in this and the next life and fie to the pain of a past life. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow, lots of pain in this one, and yet, hope in the muse helping to set you free, great write. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are writing well Moon..  ~Wynter |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... the feel is palpable.... |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
This is very painful. I hope forgetfulness visits you soon or remembering hurts less. Well written. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
forgetfulness is something that comes slowly. . .but, thankfully. . . it does come. . . well done Sandra. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I sense a certain "depth" to your expressions of late, Sandra, and it seems to propel your art even further than before... For what it is worth, my opinion is such: though I completely and whole-heartedly understand the emotions involved in the desire for "forgetfulness", I would adamantly state that it is not forgetfulness which should be desired but Wisdom and Peace -- acknowledgement of what was and what is and a decision to let the past positively contribute to one's growth... I say this while totally and perhaps hypocritically basking in moments of equal sentiment such as what you have described... I figure that as long as they are strictly moments and are acknowledged for being just that, then there are no worries -- just expressions and resolutions. In any case, I am most certainly enjoying your works. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Let forgetfullness fill me Otherwise I'll not be free. -------------------------- Deeply sad....... a Well-done deep piece....... Thank you *************************** |
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