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Journal of Drenching Memories |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
(Dedicated to Mark - thank you, my sweet one...missin' ya...  )After losing my stability in the echo of your voice; I contemplated the facets of your dialect. Fly back with me, baby, to the falls Where we encountered our connection. Only when I am where the overcast light paints us And illuminates our attachment’s essence Will I be able to part with the stones I’ve been carrying around And skip them across the stream To where the bridge has long since been washed out. Naturally formed passages join these two worlds With adornment of ancient creek belongings And the music of your heart’s passion. No man has been able to distinguish Where this sacred river’s course ends; It’s almost as if the mystery of its destination Has urged our eyes into this intertwining stare. The surge of the downpour...the waterfall just in reach; The accounts resting therein eternally recorded in our life’s pages... -kh  tried to write a letter to tell you how I feel, but all I kept on writing was slipping on the tears from the day... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 08-23-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
marvelous...Mark will surely be blessed by such a lovely rendering |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fantastic, Kris! Very beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
After losing my stability in the echo of your voice; ================================= Naturally formed passages join these two worlds With adornment of ancient creek belongings And the music of your heart’s passion. No man has been able to distinguish Where this sacred river’s course ends; It’s almost as if the mystery of its destination Has urged our eyes into this intertwining stare. The surge of the downpour...the waterfall just in reach; The accounts resting therein eternally recorded in our life’s pages... ======================================== no poetic compliments or critiques from me on this one...ok? Im just gonna sit here and smile... at the poem...and the pic... and the intend ... the inspiration.  very cool write K...very  Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ This is simply lovely, lovely, lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
VAS: thank you...I hope so! glad you liked it! Denise: thank you, m'friend...I'm happy you enjoyed this! J: nadda prob, girlie...those words mean just as much to me...thanks, J... Marge: thank you, my friend...I appreciate the hugs and the lovely's...glad you liked it!  sp  tried to write a letter |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SO...did I ever tell ya about the time I went to the NB? NO??? I didnt? Silly me... must of slipped me moth mind (hehe) WELL THEN ... let me show ya my trip pics.... WHAT???? You DONT believe me??? Oh...well ... thats SOOOOO typical, I'd expect that from a Mets fan and an Aquarian Cowboy  Sheesh...whatever.... Im still gonna show ya the pics  BOW to the QUEEN of WEBSHOTS SEARCH!! ROFLMAO Damn I crack my self up   later blahblah-gators      gotta see this one BIG http://wsphotofews.excite.com/006/Ye/zg/5l/Aq32600.jpg |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is scribed with the quill still protruding from your heart! You both are so delightful and I can't help but hope you two meld into one big lump of love. Beautiful. Sincerely, Regina |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Wonderful .....beautiful piece!! love it very much Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
These memories and the ones we have yet to share are all ones to emerse ourselves in my sweet and I plan on making more than just one journal out of them. LOL So beautiful is your vision into the shadows of what is there that I am constantly amazed at your abitlity to reach them so vividly. Excellent write and you KNOW I am honored by what you share with me. Thank you for the dedication but most importantly, thank you for walking into my life. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
J: been to NB before, huh?? UH HUH...very cool pics, though...thanks, girlie...yer a stinkin laugh riot...  Regina: well, thank you for that reply...I am glad you liked this! Charisma: thanks so much! glad you enjoyed! M: oh, the pleasure is definitely all mine, sweets...I think I've learned more about different places lately than I have in my entire life, and you would be the one to thank! I do appreciate everything, you know...and, I, too, plan on more than just one journal...  ...thank you, baby, for your wonderful reply, too!  sp tried to write a letter |
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