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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-08-23 08:34 PM


Her majesty lands
into setting day's shadow-
reflecting waters

© Copyright 2001 Kevin Rainbow - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-23 08:39 PM


what a lovely, lovely image...I would thoroughly enjoy seeing a swan land gently onto the water, twinning its image in a peaceful mirror

you took me there...in my mind's eye at least


rwood
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2 posted 2001-08-24 07:15 AM


What a beautiful setting. Breathtaking it would be. Gorgeous!

Sincerely,
Regina

Nan
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3 posted 2001-08-24 08:19 AM


Swans are my favorite - Very nicely done..
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4 posted 2001-08-24 08:51 AM


yes a lovely image captures with so few words... very nice.. very nice indeed
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5 posted 2001-08-24 09:30 AM


imagery and succinctity...your signature.
nice to see you posting again Poeminster
well done and welcome back poet sir  
jm

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

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6 posted 2001-08-24 11:28 AM


indeed the queen of avian ways. . .

well done. . .

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7 posted 2001-08-26 08:08 AM


good to see you posting again...

i had some fun imaging that swan in my mind

Charisma
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8 posted 2001-08-26 10:24 AM


what a beautiful picture you captured with this haiku....love it...!!

Charisma

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9 posted 2001-08-26 11:58 AM


graceful and regal,
beautifully done  

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