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Without You |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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So lost without you, gone is the sun from my day... Alone in my heartache, without you I can’t find my way... I promised you always, and always, I’ll wait and be true... For always and ever, I’ll simply exist, without you... I’ll stay lost without you, until you return I will cry... The tears just keep falling without you, they never will dry... The time passes slowly, I wait, and that’s all I can do... My life has no sunshine. it’s dark, and so cold, without you... Our love is a promise, two hearts, joined as one, make a home... Although mine keeps beating, without you, it beats all alone... I need you beside me, please take all the love I can give... For now, and forever, it’s only WITH you I can live... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 08-23-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What's up, friend? Hope things are ok. I understand every word of this, of course, and feel it daily. But YOU my dear, are supposed to be happy right now.. Nice poem, but worrisome.. Sandra |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Being alone is no fun and I feel it in every word you have written. Many of us feel your pain - hang in there and follow your heart. I am confident that all will work out. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Had these feelings a few times myself...take care of your heart...if it can't find happiness in the place it desires perhaps new opportunities will provide that happiness....James |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
only one thing is worse than being alone...being with someone and still feeling alone....great read Lady....enjoyed it..even if it does hit close |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so full of such true loving devotion.....wow....tender and heartflet beyond words.  |
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