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One Too Many |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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My lover lives in worlds of two the one with me, the other-you. Poor choices haunt us both today but for how long must errors pay? The one who sets a fire within How could he be naught but a sin How much can loving e'er be wrong My only dreams held in his song. The nights of lonely, days of gray Such regrets we didn't stay way back before it was too late and now it's all left up to fate. I say good-bye with logics mind but back he comes, hearts cannot lie I hear him whisper on the wind he calls to me-come home again... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
You've gone "deep-sea fishing" here, Sandra -- this requires some wave-gazing to contemplate and comprehend the ripple-effect implied... I enjoyed this but am not sure I got all the conotations, though on the surface, the water seems treadable... A resounding "hmmm..." -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Sometimes, they "come home" again....... KTDA... Love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
but. . . do we listen? well done my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh I am listening..but he is not  |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Home is where your heart is. At least that's what they say. A very emotional tug. The poem is clear in struggle of decision. Between your heart and mind. Those battles are so exhausting. The answer will come. Hang in there. Sincerely, Regina |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, but Sandra, gentle one, it is a two way street and it seems he only wants it one way, games, only games..just be sure you win..very gentle smile |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The one who sets a fire within How could he be naught but a sin How much can loving e'er be wrong My only dreams held in his song. Relate a bit more than I care to admit in the light of day. You've written it well. |
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