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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
i feel tears forming in the corners of my eyes dropping down onto the bed sheets i'll never ask again why i lied i ask and ask i try and try i feel tears hot and silent why is it all in my mind? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
this one grips you and rips at what is inside... strong emotions in this... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can feel the sadness in the questioning... huggsss ~Wynter |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Wow...can't quite figure this one out but I love the way it reads. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The what is making the tears. Why's come from heartache. It's okay to ask why. The tears help you search your heart. I hope you find something to bring back your smile. Sincerely, Regina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perhaps. . . but then again. . . strong emotions here. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
powerful poem! |
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