a whispered wish for secret friend

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-08-23 04:05 PM

A certain wind
that beckons
from out of season's place...
Paradise
in blanket spread--
patterns of the leaves to trace.
Endless sky of summoning,
a hand of comfort over mine--
silent song among the trees,
the ceasing of relentless time.

All of this was given free--
simply, for I had the need.
A miracle begun in me--
the change of water into wine.
And oh if I could make you see,
you'd know you are a gift divine.
I'd do for you,
what you did for me--
make nightmare of your memories,
each tear, a star, forever shine...

(just a little poetic lingerie---a repost for a friend who made me smile two days in a row--grinning WIDELY)

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-08-23 04:11 PM

I like the beginning of miracles ... like birth

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Elizabeth

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2 posted 2001-08-23 04:16 PM

Friendship at its best.

VAS
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3 posted 2001-08-23 04:16 PM

Ah, lovely...each tear a star? SUPERB!

Marge Tindal

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4 posted 2001-08-23 04:21 PM

Serenity~

'Endless sky of summoning,
a hand of comfort over mine--
silent song among the trees,
the ceasing of relentless time.

All of this was given free--
simply, for I had the need.'

What easier reason to give ...
just because a friend had need~

Lovely, poetess~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-08-23 04:23 PM

and a very nice gift it is...

wonderful words... as usual...

I enjoyed a great deal!!

Lady In White

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6 posted 2001-08-23 04:33 PM

While meant for one, this
could very well encompass
many a poet

so smiles will tender
gently along the faces,
only one to know it...

Balladeer

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7 posted 2001-08-23 04:34 PM

Yes, a friend who can make one smile when one has the need is indeed a good friend and should be treated as such....very well said, Serenity....

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2001-08-23 04:50 PM

to need and to be needed are wonderful gifts...glad someone touched your hand, your smile and your heart...helen

doreen peri
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9 posted 2001-08-23 04:52 PM

lovely!!!!

vandana

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10 posted 2001-08-23 05:15 PM

enjoyed

Mysteria

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11 posted 2001-08-23 05:26 PM

Don't you just love smiling? What a wonderful bit of lingerie you hung out for us the peek at, and so artfully done.

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Janet Marie
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12 posted 2001-08-23 06:39 PM

All of this was given free--
simply, for I had the need.
A miracle begun in me--
the change of water into wine.
And oh if I could make you see,
you'd know you are a gift divine.
I'd do for you,
what you did for me--
make nightmare of your memories,
each tear, a star, forever shine...
=====================

I do so love your rhymes divine...
you me sweet ... surely do shine

me

kaile

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singapore

13 posted 2001-08-26 07:53 AM

and now you made me smile as well

wonderful...

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

14 posted 2001-08-26 08:44 AM

Wonderful! It's nice to know you're smiling...

serenity blaze
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15 posted 2001-08-27 12:01 PM

I HUG you all...you all made me smile AGAIN.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2001-08-27 04:49 AM

serenity-
   It's so nice to see your smile again!
   This is beautiful!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

17 posted 2001-08-27 06:05 AM

Exceptional writing Celeste! Captivating to say the least!

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