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Eyes - another shape poem
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Eyes - another shape poem |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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Eyes The windows to our souls. Our pain trickles from them in symmetrical drops - they give away what we try to hold deep inside - you can't hide the emotions from their powerful openings smiles, laughs, and tears, all true emotion, will be displayed. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah, it's all in the eyes indeed SmittenKitten ... a lovely shape to compliment these sentiments, nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~  Girlie girl ... just look at you ! ! ! I'm so proud of you ! I'm grinning from eyeball to eyeball.  Love it ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... a pleasure as usual... quite creative in both words and shape... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
These are fun to do, and I know they are NOT easy! Well done! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Clever presentation! The content is very well done also! |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Excellent! What a novel comcept! the writing was as imaginative as the design. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice...and yep I am a perfect example, you can see right though to my soul...through my eyes.....can't hide a thing....sigh |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
your artistic prowess is showing, not to mention your ganas to do your very best at whatever your endeavor...delightful in both realms of art here |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
SmittenKitten~ I have always loved shape poems! Very clever and well expressed!~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superbly done SK. . . and well written. . . great job. . . (: -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love your blue eye(s), SK Well done indeed! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
They can be addicting can't they??? So nice to see you playing with the shapes and including such nice poetry within them. Wonderful indeed. Oh, btw ... "cowboy" simply cause I AM!!! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very nice and what the poem says is oh so true. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool SK.. looks perfect and reads perfect!! I think your hooked  well done. jm |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wow! Very cool! I really like this concept, and the poem is wonderful. It (looks) like it would be tough to do. I will just read in awe of your talent. (I'm afraid mine would look like an abstract mess, and my words would slide off the page!) Bravo! Sincerely, Regina |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Kit ~ I love eyes you can tell a person's true beauty through them.Marge ~ hehehe thank you so much for introducing me to them! They're *so* much fun! *hugs*Cpat ~ thank you it's fun to try and match them!ethome ~ thanks a bunch  gunslinger ~ I got the concept from Marge it's a challenge to try and get the form and words to compliment each other but well worth the effort!jellybeans ~ the saying is "she wears her heart on her sleeve" but I think it's more to do with eyes myself! let your emotions shine through, it's a good thing! VAS ~ wow, what a beautiful compliment. Thank you so much! I can only hope to be as talented as yourself someday.Melissa ~ Thanks I love them now too! Sven ~ thanks! have I told you how much I love your signature??Interloper ~ hehe, why thank you mine are actually green...although my mom is still convinced they're as blue as the day I was born! Mark ~ YES! Very thanks for reading and encouraging my addiction, Cowboy Shadow974 ~ thank you Janet Marie ~ yes, I think so too! And it's *all* Marge's fault! I'm having so much fun though. Thanks for being here to enjoy it with me!rwood ~ hehe, it's really not as hard as it looks! It just takes patience, which is the real challenge! I believe you would be a success at these Thank you all for your kind words! Really made my day  Hugs to all!  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
You've done very well, in what you have written and how you presented it. Concrete poetry (this style) is not easy at all and you've done an excellent job. Snow "Trace my body with your words |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SmittenKitten- Wow! You're doing a wonderful job on these shape poems! Aren't they fun?! Can't wait to see what you come up with next.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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ramrog Member
since 2001-08-22
Posts 50 |
coooool, I like that... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Snow~ it is certainly a challenge but a fun challenge! You should see some of the awesome shape poems they come up with in Open #10. Janet Marie suggested I check them out and man am I humbly amazed! I can only aspire to be that talented Hey, I really like your signature..very poetic.Vicky~ hehe, well you're bad! Now you've got my fingers itching to try some more But, I must wait for my muse to catch the feeling as well!Ramrog~ hehe, your icon is hilarious thanks for stopping by!Hugs to all of you! [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-27-2001).] |
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