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Carousels Of White |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Carousels Of White ~*Marge Tindal*~  Around the forum in songs of delight Spinning the penning of LadyInWhite Caught up in the chime of rhyme She'll catch you every time Reaching for that elusive brass ring Stretching imagination on flight of wing Yes, I hear the calliope playing with sweet songs of thee~ *Guess who this one's for~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Why Marge, you should know that the brass ring isn't so elusive when tenacity and stubborness to find the bright rests in one's soul of white... darn it girl, this is a keeper, but of course! And I wouldn't trade it for just any horse, but one, that of which is of many colors... Oh I so enjoyed! Thank you! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is such a nice thing to write about a fellow poet.  The first time I opened this the music file crashed my computer, LOL  But I came back, yep it was worth it.  You eat the brains of an old, wise man. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A fine tribute by a great poet lady to another  |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nicely done Marge. Good metaphor too!  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
How delightful! Love the music too. Your poetry always makes me smile! Hugs, Deb |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Marge you should have seen Tori's face when this came on! She ran from clear across the living room LOL, now you did it! The fair is on here, and I promised to take her next week. This was delightful - send me a cheque to cover expenses at the PNE please LOL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words always ring so true..very lovely... ~Wynter |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ My pleasure to honor you in rhyme~ Glad you like it !  Allan~ Thanks for taking two rides ! InterLoper~ Thanks from both of us, I'm sure~ Elizabeth~ Thank you for the read and reply. BloomingRose~ I like grabbing those smiles~ Mysteria~ LOL ... Oh boy ! Going to the fair ! Alright ! ! ! HI TORI~ Wynter~ Thanks, hon. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Ok...I give up. Who's it for? LOL! I absolutely love this, and it's perfect for our Lady In White. Wonderful! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ LOL .... I'm NOT telling~  You crack me up, girl~ Now ... get OFF the merry-go-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round-round~ You are becoming a dizzy blonde! Lova you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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