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Sweating Seas
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sliding drip from brow finds pathways leading down the cheek in gentle tickling stroke to fall on chest following crease of breastbone slick sliding to navel. there puddled I touch it and taste earthy salt We are the sea they say and I am floating now in you |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I do believe this shall float about the top of the forum all day.... well done, Sir.... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
goodness, I'm melted........... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
you must have a lap top  |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
woo  I love your sea travelling! More, more! I very much enjoyed...'though now I must go find a cool fridge! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This borders on cruelty. (Send batteries...)  ? (and I'm trying to be good but he makes it so HARD....see? ) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"We are the sea they say and I am floating now in you" sooooooooooooooo romantic...helen |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Come with me My love To the sea The sea of love I want to tell you Oh how much, I love this. Drift a while will you. And then maybe the back stroke? Just a suggestion.  Sincerely, Regina |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweetly seductive. Nice.... Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
DELICIOUS!!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OHHHHHH mercy...Im with serenity...how can a girl be good when you tepmt them so? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
LOL @ VAS! If there's such a thing at reincarnation...a drop of sweat, I'll happily be. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat--How easily you set the scene of sensual with just a few well chosen words. Smiling here! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Very Well Done!!!!!! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love this one, skin deep. |
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