Open Poetry #15 |
The Warrior and His Princess (duet with Logan) |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thank you, Sweet Warrior for the dance of muses tonight. Thank you also for your strength and helping me keep faith in mine. only such, could put worries to flight a warm hand clasps, with fingers soft, a beckoning smile send spirits aloft. Stars that sparkle call my name. Wind enamored makes me tame. Your warm hands that find me lost hold my boat however tossed. To be for you is all I ask, awaking memories of distant past. Ask me not, of what I see, from those days back in eternity I will not ask, but I will gently steal this warrior's shoulder on which to heal. So hold this head of mine tonight. Forget the torture of yesternight. To hold you close in this starry night, Allowing your soul return to light. You know the feel, it was as before, In long ago ages, beyond shadows door. My sweet, you held me even then, Gave patient smiles for the gentlemen, That asked a princess for a dance, While I, your love, so often glanced. As guardian I watched to keep from harm, You stole my heart when you took my arm. But never could I let you see For a princess and a warrior could not be. Dear sir, you did not hide it well, For from your eyes your love did swell. Although enrapt in your adoration A dutiful princess was a slave to station. Then the flight to foreign shores, Caste was gone forevermore. Propriety was kept till plain to see, There could be no returning to the land of thee. But in your memory lies my hand Caressing there with time's old sand. Think of me in the evening's caress, As love smiles fond with agelessness. With a shooting star across the sky, The past was gone with a sigh. Was it a dream the caress had brought? It was too real, a timeless sought. One more time the breeze commanded As she lifted her head, a kiss had landed. For gentle love of long ago, Did on her cheek his kiss bestow. Don't gain my affections then cover my eyes. Don't sweep me off my feet then fail to catch me before I hit the floor. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 08-23-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is lovely Jenn...wonderful teamwork you two |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But in your memory lies my hand Caressing there with time's old sand. Think of me in the evening's caress, As love smiles fond with agelessness. With a shooting star across the sky, The past was gone with a sigh. Was it a dream the caress had brought? It was too real, a timeless sought. One more time the breeze commanded As she lifted her head, a kiss had landed. For gentle love of long ago, Did on her cheek his kiss bestow. ================================ this is WONDERFUL you two...it flows like butter... no,-- like mystic waterfalls... very very cool write and melding of two poets gifts... the trust and friendship lights up the verses... like i said....very cool jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . this was very well done. . . a great flow and a great story. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TemptyOne and Logan~ Just a lovely cascade of souls~ 'To hold you close in this starry night, Allowing your soul return to light. You know the feel, it was as before, In long ago ages, beyond shadows door.' *sigh* ... very nice~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is gorgeous...but how could it not be? And now I hear Jenn's voice everytime I read her...AND Logan is joy to write and chat with..a true beauty of a poetic team here!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh, you two!! What a team!! What a beautiful story....I long for more! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
WOWZERS! I hope you will do more of these, this was simply wonderful you two, and loved the story. Kudos to you both, on a great collaboration. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Awesomely wonderful, princess. And to the warrior, you too are a dream poet. Loved every bit of this. Sandra |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Jennifer and Logan, What a writing team you two make! Absolutely wonderful work...I love this. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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