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Sun On Your Face---with Poemcrazy
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Sun On Your Face---with Poemcrazy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I dream you in a sunlit field, surrounded by flowers, basking in the glow... the sun touching your face as I long to do. Kissing it softly. Your touch is like wind, slide over me, open my eyes and let me see... see myself in your eyes all I can be all you make of me. The sun in your eyes, makes me think of cloudless skies and faraway rendezvous', filled with sighs. And the heart skips a beat in time, listening to hidden rhyme, imagining a far off clime. Sinlit beaches and starry nights, wordlessly mumbling "hold me tight" and the gentlest touch of lips on mine. Kisses salty with ocean spray, stolen kisses as day fades away, crimson and shadows soft on your skin love through the night to begin again. In the dawning. [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 08-23-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great poem...I really liked this part Your touch is like wind, slide over me, open my eyes and let me see... see myself in your eyes all I can be all you make of me. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
can i say aww shucks or is this artistic embellishment yadda yadda... you go two! |
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