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Another World |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Come with me to enchanted land and forest built of golden trees where unicorns drink peacefully and lavender has come to seed. Join me in journey of the heart to magic places never known where knights and maids stroll hand in hand and no one ever feels alone. Perhaps some honey will rain down whilst bathing in an azure pool as sweet caresses everyone and ruby crystals glow as jewels. A little further down the path a group of men philosophize and maidens sit and listen rapt while sipping goblets filled with wine. Come with me, let us not stay here (such place of hate and greed and lies) to land of mermaids and of love where no one shall have need to cry. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
You paint it so well, Sandra..leave a ticket open for me when the train leaves to Perfectland...very gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is wonderful..the imagery is lovely..the whole poem has a fairy tale essence to it... Your new pic is lovely too  well done poetess Cat jm Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
sounds like a great place isn;t fantasy fun! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hello gorgeous! Love the new pic, Miss Sandra! love the poem..and I love your spirit too, sweet lady! HUGS to you! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My parallel-self is already there... once in a while, if I meditate and listen, I can experience that life and be inspired in this one. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful place, maybe someday, oh, today, just close your eyes. We are there. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sandra- Sounds like a wonderful place. You've painted such lovely imagery here. Beautifully done, my friend. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
I know the place well... my "Imagination Playground"... I have a well worn path to and from the gate. Unfortunately I can't stay there forever. (sigh) You paint the picture perfectly. |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Come with me, let us not stay here (such place of hate and greed and lies) to land of mermaids and of love where no one shall have need to cry. A compelling walk through a spirited dream...magic. Willie [This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Perhaps some honey will rain down whilst bathing in an azure pool as sweet caresses everyone and ruby crystals glow as jewels. a mid eastern turn to this phrase in some ways..and one which stood out in my mind as I read... nicely done |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written sandra..loved it hugss ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
these are lovely thoughts, just lovely. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I don't even dream of such nice places but wouldn't it be.................... Enjoyed "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, This is truly beautiful. What a perfect Utopia you have painted here..... Love, Elise |
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