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She's Near (double Cinquain)
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She's Near (double Cinquain) |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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She's Near (in Cinquain) she writes of his love ~ faith worn against her flesh ~ ink blood scribed onto the parchment ~ she's waiting Tonight shared horizon she reaches out to you will you feel the winds whisper ~ and believe "Trace my body with your words |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I confess I do not know what a cinquain is...but I so admire the ability to say so much in so few words. (I never know when to shaddup...) These words leave a lasting impression. I enjoyed much.  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
I confess I do not know what a cinquain is...but I so admire the ability to say so much in so few words. (I never know when to shaddup...) These words leave a lasting impression. I enjoyed much. serenity... a Cinquain is a 5 line poem with a syllable count of 2 4 6 8 2 ~~ I have moments when I too don't know when to stop, this is exactly why I love Cinquain. It keeps me focused on what it is I truly want to say. Thank you for your comment! Snow "Trace my body with your words |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you know i like your cinquains, Snow... faith worn against her flesh i liked that line |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Very lovely indeed. And a lesson within. For I too did not know Cinquain. Thank you for sharing such wonderful verse. Sincerely, Regina |
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