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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-08-22 03:14 PM

Trembling
quavered touch
of this softness
you so shyly
have offered

phrased
with simple punctuations
it flows from heart
to pen to paper
and lies there
delicately
hoping no gust
of wind will blow

eye stroked
the words shimmer
as tear dropped
the pains come alive
the heat begins to dry
the questions ask us why

Trembling
quavered touch
of this softness
you so shyly offer

I read again
the things inside

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-08-22 03:19 PM

That one has offered such delicacies as you would cherish them so much as to pen this is a delightful thought...

well done Sir!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-08-22 03:22 PM

You DO hae a way with words my friend. Wonderfully woven and laid out

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

3 posted 2001-08-22 03:52 PM

Beautifully done! Bravo!
Cindi

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-08-22 08:27 PM

There was much between these lines. You speak of writing in such versatile terms. This one is so very lovely.

Sincerely,
Regina

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-08-22 08:36 PM

Oh my...Oh my, so very good!! Enjoyed! Just let me catch my breath again.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-08-22 11:43 PM

wonderful, wonderful, especially this section:

phrased
with simple punctuations
it flows from heart
to pen to paper
and lies there
delicately
hoping no gust
of wind will blow

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2001-08-23 09:31 AM

Very lovely, Cap'n... I'm enjoying your words - They do somehow paint a completely new and unique portrait with each of your works... Nice write..

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

8 posted 2001-08-23 09:44 AM

Light and lithe lament to a literate Love (I take it) Enjoyed.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-08-23 10:28 AM

Ron,
I love this.
touching deep.

keeping this.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-08-23 11:33 AM

enjoyed this

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

11 posted 2001-08-23 03:35 PM

"I read again
the things inside"
to be truly understood by another is one of the greatest gifts you can give them...helen

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