Open Poetry #15 |
Nightdreams |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Nightdreams ~*~ Shadows parlay light Skein by skein sheer lacy dream Come to me this night ~*~ Toward your recall Fingers touching mist of real Footsteps down past’s hall ~*~ Hearts quietly reaching Words silenced though beseeching Still, I come to you ~*~ [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-22-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very soft..and romantic... I enjoy the images created with so few words and the emotions conveyed... a talent indeed!! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautifully written. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love the way this makes me feel and think very nice!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What SEA said Is she following me? |
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Wes Utica Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 28California |
Lady - your words do not betray your title. These are not silly day dream meanderings. They are the stuff dreams are made of. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Lady, never have so few words said so very much. What a wonderful write and the pic, well, you could easily walk down that path into the past...very gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hate to imitate Interloper, but ditto what Logan just said really! ~*Homepage*~ http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/722155 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Such a lovely stroll to take~ Likes me muchly~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"Hearts quietly reaching Words silenced though beseeching Still, I come to you" Pure art! You get a wow on this one. Michael Auguste~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, this says it all. Wonderful work. Sandra |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lady in White, a wonderful write, so discriptive and full of wonderment. Rick |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Enjoyed this very much ... it pulls the strings that make me smile |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
very soft "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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