Sultry Eyes-----with Poemcrazy

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Open Poetry #15

Sultry Eyes-----with Poemcrazy

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-08-22 02:24 AM

It started with a look....the one that draws me across the room.

Your lips, pouting, sensual.
I feel your fire, warmth, desire.
as eyes lock.

It's hard to decide
if it's your lips, or your eyes,
that hypnotize.

The room goes dark,
but for the beacon of beckoning lips,
and the sounding of sultry eyes.

I draw closer
mesmerized by the shape
tantalized by the colour.

Drawn deeper, then deeper still
By what I see reflected by the stars
Glowing brighter than the moon.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-08-22 03:11 AM

To me it's the lips and the eyes...and the touching and the responses...wonderful writing...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-08-22 05:08 AM

This is such sensuous writing!

              "The room goes dark,
                but for the beacon of beckoning lips,
                and the sounding of sultry eyes.

                I draw closer
                mesmerized by the shape
                tantalized by the colour.

                Drawn deeper, then deeper still
                By what I see reflected by the stars
                Glowing brighter than the moon."

This kind of writing will always promote that incurable passionate disease called love. There is no escape from such open passion so I must warn all unsuspecting guys...you know... give them a chance. Every man has to be able to get out of bed every once in a while and watch football.....LOOK OUT GUYS!  you're going to like this way too much!!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-08-23 12:27 PM

James...always first in the eyes...then the kiss...oh yes

ethome....HEY!!!!!! No fair warning them you...heheh thank you

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-08-28 08:55 AM

Paula & PoemCrazy~
I missed this the first time around~
It's lovely and I'm sending it to the top~
Very nice, you two !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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