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Never Say Good-Bye
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Never Say Good-Bye |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I'll never say good-bye to love Perhaps just au revoir because such love won't leave in full always, there needs be more. I'll never say good-bye to love Perhaps an adios A promise to meet soon again Our poem is not yet prose. I'll never say good-bye to love let doors slam as they will One day such pain as this shall end and I will have my fill. He said good-bye so harshly once and then he took it back we both can feel our needs still live there's too much love we lack. I can give him passions' fire and love unbreakable He only has to open arms to pull me from this hell. I'll never say good-bye to love the thing that holds the cure to vacant hearts across the miles One day he will be sure. So to such end I must confess a weakening of power It matters small who gives in first a rose is still a flower. I wait then so, in such a way to keep my heart alive and ask him please, it's now enough come back and let love thrive. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A lovely work and an enjoyable read  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
never say goodbye. . . I love it. . . this was wonderful Sandra. . . in fact. . .in the Library it goes. . . one of your best. . . Love will always be my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
So to such end I must confess a weakening of power It matters small who gives in first a rose is still a flower. Sometimes, it takes strength to see that winning isn't the answer. i liked this alot. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A wonderful message of hope. "Au revoir" is such lovely, beseeching and seductive parting. Our english good-bye is so blah isn't it. I agree. Save the english version for someone who Blahs you. I hope you get to say "Hello" mon amore! Sincerely, Regina |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, How beautiful! I can relate completely..We can never say good-bye to love, no matter how we try... Love, Elise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Goodbyes in any form are always hard to do. This is an excellent write, I enjoyed it very much. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"Our poem is not yet prose." What a wonderful line! It matters small who gives in first a rose is still a flower. ...and these two as well -- very powerful and emoting! I don't think that real Love can ever hear the words "good bye" -- the people may leave but not our true love of them... such is the "human experience." A very heart-felt write, Sandra. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sandra- This is beautiful! Some wonderful phrases in this... "A promise to meet soon again Our poem is not yet prose." and "it matters small who gives in first a rose is still a flower." Love it! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-27-2001).] |
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ramrog Member
since 2001-08-22
Posts 50 |
I enjoyed this very much. |
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