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Rainy Wishes |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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The rains came gently in the night Waking me To soft soothing sounds releasing my spirit to dance opening the doors I fight so hard, to keep closed the water flowed freely clinging to my exposed soul trickling down in gentle caress to where my heart lay naked gathering in pools of moonlit love and as each healing drop fell upon me I had only one thought Only one wish . . . . . . . You ~SEA~ "I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sigh ... Sigh ... I wish it were me, too  Beautiful piece, gal, just beooootifuuuul! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
SEA...you have captured so very well the rush of healing waters....this is a very well crafted gift of song... I so enjoyed it...well done, Little One.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Rainy nights and Tuesdays - always lift me~ Thank you for sharing this delicate lovely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect girlie...perfect your muse the rain brought out another sensual, soft beauty in you... very very nice Susan  Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
does it really rain in California? It sure does here! This gave me a warm feeling all over! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Blame it on the rain...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very sweet Sea...enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So nice to see a piece of poetic love inspired by not only someone special but one of nature's greatest gifts as well. Beautifully penned and presented. |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Mom~ Good Poem of course it was the rain LOL Jezz be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Why would you ever fight to keep these doors closed? Beautiful love. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Sea, I like your presentation. An exquisite write. Written with a longing and yearning in your soul. Nights can bring healing if we allow the drops to wash our hurts away. Kudos! I applaud  with much admiration. Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Great write SEA, I truely enjoyed. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
SEA this is an exquisite piece of poetry. Great imagery too. Deb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Soft and gentle as a summer rain.~ Loved it...well done Sea. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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