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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-21 09:01 AM

Where Love Lives

take me
deep within
to the place
long past skin
even further
than desire
to the start
where thoughts transpire
to the beginning
where love’s refined
there I’ll dance
in your mind

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-08-21 09:49 AM

Dance in my mind ... interesting thought. Better wash your feet first

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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-08-21 09:21 PM

Helen - you MUST stop blowing me away with your poetry

Girl, you rock! I'm printing this one out, it's just such a cool inspire, heck, this has always been my philosophy - that the mind is the sexiest organ of a man (but you say it better)

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 08-21-2001).]

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

3 posted 2001-08-21 09:52 PM

Just excellent, I loved it.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-08-25 10:53 AM

Another beautiful write....

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-08-25 05:05 PM

The place where we can trip the Light Fandango. Fantastic write!

Sincerely,
Regina

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-08-25 07:19 PM

OneSlickLady~
Beautifully said~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kay Vibbert
Junior Member

since 2001-08-25

Posts 35
Indiana

7 posted 2001-08-25 10:32 PM

Hey! No, got enough things going on in that mind of mine, ha ha, I like this, Helen, like it a lot

Kay (aka/Irish Rose)

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

8 posted 2001-08-25 11:09 PM

Nice write, to be loved that's the great desire.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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