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rwood
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Tennessee

0 posted 2001-08-21 07:40 AM



Skies of heaven's rapture
Eyes of lovely pools
Water of washing clarity
Navy of nautical suits

Willow of ancient china
Notes of musical sorrow
Moon of lonely longing
Ribbon of first place honor

Mountains of misty peaks
Dress of the devil's wear
Suede shoes of rock-n-roll
Essence of deep despair

Welcoming of new baby boys
Following black of undue pain
Jeans of classic attire
Berries of the Coast of Main

Prints of a lovely dream home
Belles of Texa's roadsides
Blood of an aristocrat
Grass of Kentucky pride

Saphires of September's song
Collar of the working class
Birds of winsome breezes
Veteran of Old Glory's task

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-08-21 08:21 AM



Darn girl...I think you covered all of the descriptions quite well without once, other than the title, mentioning the key word....

I enjoyed this VERY much!

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-08-21 10:32 AM


Yes, this is very creatively styled.
Sandra

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3 posted 2001-08-21 10:43 AM


I love scattershooting pieces like this   You did this very well and it was an enhoyable read.

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VAS
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Oregon
4 posted 2001-08-21 12:06 PM


that's a lot of blue
yet there's nothing 'blue' (sad) about it in the whole of it...it brings joy and anticipation of other colors to come, or to even try myself...enjoyed!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-08-21 12:18 PM


Rwood,
Nicely done, I enjoyed the read.

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
6 posted 2001-08-21 12:54 PM


You have quite the imagination...very creative!

You do blue very well    I wonder...will there be more colours to come or was this a one time thing?  

Hugs,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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