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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-08-19 02:30 AM


So This...No Ta Ta and Vous La Da?

I suppose you're mad at me
and I don't know exactly what I can say
and it's almost impossible to get
in touch with you anyway.
So all I can say is...No ta ta?
And this...Vous la da?
I'm not exactly sure what that means.
It seems like a good form of expression
to cover these kinds of extremes.
I imagine on this occasion it could mean...
What did I do to displease you?
What should I do when I miss you?
Not too much I could possibly say
to someone who's not there.
Not much left to say
to a woman that doesn't care.
So this...No ta ta?  
And this...Vous la da?

Jameslee@August18,2001

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 2001-08-19 05:27 PM


Soooooo sad, James.
cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
2 posted 2001-08-20 12:03 PM


I'm sorry if this is true James! I send you a great big hug!
Cindi

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-08-21 10:27 AM


Hi James,

This is sad yes, but I liked the words you chose to fill in when one can not say them in person, Im sending you a hug as well  

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 08-21-2001).]

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
4 posted 2001-08-21 12:57 PM


Yes, very sad James...but such a lovely poem.  I like your choice of words as well.
Hugs,
~Krista

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