I caught happiness . . . Senryu string

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Open Poetry #15

I caught happiness . . . Senryu string

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-08-20 06:57 PM

I caught happiness
I will never let it go
there is pleasure here
~*~
hate is a burden
abomination to peace
die, anathema
~*~
joy and pleasure reign
I will never let them go
I caught happiness

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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-08-20 07:15 PM

And well deserved happiness also...really did like this. You say it all in so short a frame..and nicely done at that...gentle smile

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-08-20 07:19 PM

beautiful..helen

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

3 posted 2001-08-20 07:25 PM

Nice write, it's all in the way we look at it.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-08-20 07:35 PM

you caught happiness
I'm so very glad for you
hold on to it tight

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 08-20-2001).]

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-08-20 09:50 PM

Hey! Titia said what I was going to say!

She is so good and so are you! This is all new to me. I love it and I'm happy for you!

Sincerely,
Regina

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-08-21 08:05 AM

This sounds like a balloon on a tether, bouncing along....the exhilaration is quite apparent! Well done!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2001-08-21 08:54 AM

I'm smiling..

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-08-21 07:42 PM

what a lovely prize to catch!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-08-22 05:30 AM

InterLoper~

Heard there is no cure
For the happiness you caught
Aren't you just so glad ?

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2001-08-22 08:50 AM

very nicely done old friend... I enjoyed!!!

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