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Reality Sings
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Reality Sings |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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 Reality Sings I walk through each day in a daze on high And, ignore my heart and all that it holds Sometimes I create a tiny place only I can fit in And, dismiss any thoughts of you a moment unfolds... I do this to survive my days I'm forced to live through When I know one more tomorrow lies on ahead As hard as I try there's always a part of you that seeps in And, I stand in untruth that I'm ok in my words unsaid... Silence leaves an impression that one flies only with the best And, that good fortune lies upon my brave numb wings Just when I think I've flown an angels pace Then, oh my God reality sings... Cause I never forget what you are about I just try to live with what I can't have And, without you nothing matters in this so broken world So, I just pretend this smile is real until you come back... Reality sings in a such a so broken sound It falls on me as hard as the November rain I should know better to think I could put this heart on hold But, I just don't know how to look at this world the same... So, it's only moments I make it carefree at last The rest of the time I still feel what your absence brings So, understand, sweet one, if I appear I walk with grace For I don't, never will, as long as reality sings... Saun Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The songs of reality are always there whether it is the tune we want to hear or not. No escaping it most times. This was a wonderful verse of powerful rhyme and the flow was a gift indeed. Very much enjoyed. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Saunni Such a sad song was played through your words and I hope a special love comes your way and fills your word with the love and happiness you deserve. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
reality sings. . . but, it need not always be in a minor key. . . wonderfully done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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