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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* Kaleidoscopic Reflections *~A memory woke me up today, A task to do was my alarm, Time to clean the attic, What could be the harm? As I climbed up the ladder, With anticipation in my soul, Longing to see the treasure boxes, But to downsize was my goal. Sunlight on dusty mirrors cast, Like rainbows in the haze; Kaleidoscopic reflections, Of those long forgotten days. Memories of lives and times, So carefully tucked away, Stored up in the attic, To be seen another day. I spotted the great old chest, Resting up against the wall, With the key of trepidation, I opened the tiny latch so small. It was filled with musty history, Collected pieces of ancient lore; Yellowed clippings, old letters, And family photographs galore. Generations of family souvenirs, All remnants of yesterday; Mementos of those special times, Each generation packed away. I traveled through that time machine, And saw the past once more; Amidst the cobwebbed memories As I sat, beyond the attic door. I finally found what I was looking for, A teddy bear my Mom had made for me, But inside were so many treasures, I felt others would want to see. How could I throw any of this away, There was even a wedding gown, I sorted it, put it all back in, And decided to pass it on down. art: "Attic Treasures" ~ Janet Kruskamp www.biggallery.com midi: "Meadow Morn" If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A trip down memory lane ... it's nice to rediscover those old treasures... Well done  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yep.. pass it down... and hope the ones that get it pass it down after you... nicely done..and a joy to read... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Oh, the memories, times gone by, lessons learned, Loved this one! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Memories but to rhyme.......now what could be better than that. I really enjoyed the read and the cadence was a treat for sure. Much enjoyed this peek into your attic. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A lovely inspire Sharon....and a beautiful title... and as always you find the perfect pic... or perhaps the pic inspired the poem... either way...its a cadenced kissed treat. well done poetess Mysteria jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* Interloper, Cpat Hair, Shadow974, Mark, and Janet Marie *~ Thank you all for coming into the attic and enjoying the waltz to memory lane. I truly appreciated that you thought it rhymed okay and thank you so much for taking the time to read this. *wink* JM this time the poem came first and I had a devil of a time finding the picture |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
With a tiny tear tricling down my cheek, I have to let you know that this piece touched me deeply. Your use of poetic imagery is suberb and so down to earth. Thanks for the gift ~  ~ "Sunlight on dusty mirrors cast, Like rainbows in the haze;Kaleidoscopic reflections,Of those long forgotten days" Fluid and sheer artistry! Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Maggie you were #7, let's hope that is so lucky for you and yours! Thank you as well for yourgift of friendship, it means so much to me, and thank you for reading my walk through memory lane. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mysteria, this poem is sooooooooooo heart warming as I've been in this situation and my mom as well and I'm sure many others here have too... You've truly captured the emotions and thoughts exquisitely PoetFriend and I'm keeping this one 4my treasureBoxLibrary for many more reads ahead... Hugs2uAlways *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Priceless~ And as you might know - stirred so many memories in the attic of my mind~ Thank you for the sheer divinity of this poem~ I treasure each phrase~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Awe the memories!!....I love it! Hugs Cindi |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
CocoBaci ~ Nice to meet you! Thank you so very much and I too went through this before with my Gramma, warms your heart doesn't it? Marge ~ Ah, if I warmed your heart I did my job. Cindy ~ I am really glad you liked it. Thank you. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I really enjoyed this Sharon. I adore treasure hunting through the attics, and you've captured the mood and sentiments beautifully in this lovely piece. Pass it all down I say ... throw nothing away. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon, this was so beautiful, and it took me on a trip down memory lane as well. I still have the first teddy bear my great grandmother gave me when I was two years old...he and my first Raggedy Ann doll sit upon my bed and will someday be passed down to my girls. They may seem like small and trivial things in the eyes of those who aren't aware of their sentimental significance...but there are some things that mark bonds to precious memories ~ and there can be no value placed on those reflections. Thanks for sharing your heart warming memories with us. Hugs, smiles, and much love to you, ~*~dawn~*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm smiling - and pass it down you should - so that your essence is intact for your future generations... Remember how much fun it is to browse through our own family heirlooms... Good plan.. Good plan.. |
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AJ MacNeil Junior Member
since 2001-05-02
Posts 40 |
I love attics !! .. we don't have them so much here in Australia .. I want to go up there and sit in yours .. can I, can I ??? .. huh huh huh ??? ... Loved the poem Sharon, left me smiling and sighing  ) .. much love to you XO |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is so precious....I enjoyed! Thank you! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very touching this morning. Makes me wish I had an attic lovely "I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
This reminds me so much of the hours and hours I spend in my Grandparent's attic. Sweet memories. Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* Kit, Sea, Lady In White, Nan ~* I am so glad you smiled (I can see you!) as that was my intention. You also made my morning smile that you enjoyed it. I kept every single slip of paper and letter I found and it is all organized (Martha Stewart would be proud) ~* Martha and Andy *~ I plan on boring you to tears with some of the things I found and I wanted to show that teddy bear to you. Glad you liked it and Andy you bet, you want to come in the attic with me and you think you can handle it - your on! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Carolina ~ I too spent many hours in the attic and sorting buttons in button jars for hours. Nostalgia always makes me smile, and I am glad it brought a memory back for you too. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed. |
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