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VAS
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0 posted 2001-08-20 01:12 PM


(be sure you read the ending, if not the middle)
Feline Thoughts
by Dumb aka Dumber

Oh, look, there’s a door.
I wonder what’s on the other side.
Oh.

Oh, look, there’s a door.
I wonder what’s on the other side.
Oh, been there, done that.

Oh, look, there’s a door.
I wonder what’s on the other side.
Oh.

Oh, look, there’s a door.
I wonder what’s on the other side.
Oh, been there, done that.

Oh, look, there’s a door.
I wonder what’s on the other side.
Oh.

Oh, look, there’s a door.
I wonder what’s on the other side.
Oh, been there, done that.

Oh, look, there’s a door.
I wonder what’s on the other side.

Oh.

Oh, look, there’s a door.

I wonder what’s on the other side.
Oh, been there, done that. . . .



[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 08-20-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-08-20 01:15 PM


Fun!
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2 posted 2001-08-20 01:25 PM


(chuckling) I am always with holding the honor of the worst thing I have ever done for the next poem I write...as I am never sure that is won't be worse than the one I just wrote...


cute...


VAS
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3 posted 2001-08-20 01:31 PM


Thank you both, and Cpat...I'll just then say...nope, THIS IS the worst thing... heh heh

This was inspired by letting my cat in and back out in less than 3 minutes this a.m.

Twarn't the first time either.


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4 posted 2001-08-20 02:57 PM


Huge grins here, Virginia!  Nicely done indeed.
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