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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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After The Edit ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ Softly scrolled on pages blue divine of verse from pen of you Sighs from heart deep in me for the visions that came to be Melody of love, played in nightly song Gilded serenade, holds my heart in your belong The lilt of your rhapsodic rhyme holds me gently for all of time Through pages of this screen you came etched in verse of your sweet name Not caring what another might think I have surrendered to your ink I've come to know this much is true After the edit ... I'm still in love with you ... ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Marge...after the edit? Who would dare edit you? Soft and lilting and true to heart. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Awe for one who needs no editing...this is beautifully done...I love your work! Big Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've surrendered to someone's ink? Marge, who stands alone? Someone's captured your heart? Oh Bravo! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
After the edit or before the edit the inspiration for this piece must have come from deep within. That's how it speaks to me anyway! Good verse Marge, very enjoyable! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love that can withstand the delete key - I love it...  ... KEWL |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice..and to sucumb to the words of another penned... can be a beautiful thing... I enjoyed!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Through pages of this screen you came etched in verse of your sweet name Not caring what another might think I have surrendered to your ink I've come to know this much is true After the edit ... I'm still in love with you ... ====================================== oh I love this premise..."after the edit" how very cool .... and ya just KNEW mothy me would love this one  ahhhh yes....surrender to the pretty blue flame *L* a lovely romantic penning Margie-girl sigh for us some more  meFeels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooooo romantic! I love it! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It is truly hard to love the 'editor'...you wrote this with such love.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You know you had me smiling with this one. It is a beautiful poem with a feeling uniquely you...which makes it special. Hugs! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very tender. Love this one Marge.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fantastic write! How well you weave your words ... a tapestry of majesty! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Ahhhhhhh ... but sometimes it's necessary, no ? Cindi~ We all can do with a little changing and rearranging~  Karilea~ LOL ! Jeez, ya' make me sound like an ole lonesome pine~ Got us laughing for sure ! ETHome~ Thank you, sweetie~ Nan~ LOL ... 'delete' is a little permanent ! CPatHair~ 'Succumb' is a nice way of saying it~ Thank you. JanetMarie~ Oh, I just love you to pieces ! Denise~ Thank you ... romance of the quill~ Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh ! PoetdeVine~ Yes, thank you. And it's really quite easy - and certainly fun ! Martie~ Thank you, love. Sister of my heart, I so appreciate you. Eloise~ *Hugs* to you, sweet lady. InterLoper~ Thanks, sweetheart~ *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- This one brought a smile to my face. "After the edit ... I'm still in love with you ..." I just love that! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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ramrog Member
since 2001-08-22
Posts 50 |
I like this very much. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Thank you for everything, my friend~ Thank you mostly just for being here and being you~  *Hugs* ... *Hugs* ... n' all that jazz~ RamRog~ Thanks for the read and reply~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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