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Rescue of Expression's Stream |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 when the monotone is lifted by the rising refrain, rest that has eluded weary eyes takes its place in mercy’s lighthouse, home before the raging waters... twilight’s intensity finds its place within the soul that has been seeking solace of serenity for so long... when words finally escape a deadlock’s custody, reticent verse will reside within the reach of a frantic poet, home on the pages of white... daylight’s impatience has learned plenty about the ache of a night that has been so secluded from the esteem of many... and even if the ideas cited don’t spell out on logic’s exterior, the iridescence of morning’s radiant lyric will settle into a sympathetic sun, prepared to reveal the way... the intruding dawn will eventually learn the etiquette of the after hours of warm August nights... -kh can I see my world without you in it? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when the monotone is lifted by the rising refrain, rest that has eluded weary eyes takes its place =============================== twilight’s intensity finds its place within the soul =============================== reticent verse will reside within the reach of a frantic poet, home on the pages of white... daylight’s impatience has learned plenty about the ache of a night that has been so secluded from the esteem of many... ==================================== the iridescence of morning’s radiant lyric will settle into a sympathetic sun, prepared to reveal the way... the intruding dawn will eventually learn the etiquette of the after hours of warm August nights... ================================= once again I say its getting harder and harder to leave off lines and not cut and paste the whole poem. there are so many cool and cleverly written lines in this..so many unique images and analogies. and as always your masterful employ of vocabulary. (which is my way of trying to sound intelligent..to tell you that you use big smartypants words)   groovy write Kris ... and way cool pic ... gotta love that webshots Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Beautifully done! I love the picture too! Cindi |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ My word ... this is really lovely~ Resplendant in a glorious array of imagery~ LOL @ JanetMarie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
J: ohhh, yeah...webshots rules...thanks, girlie...you always flatter me so...you know how I appreciate your loyal replies...thanks much...yer the groovy one...  Cindi: thanks...it is a very cool pic, isn't it?? I'm glad you liked it!  Marge: thanks, m'friend, for your wonderful reply...your compliments mean much to me!! glad you enjoyed! sp  can I see my world without you in it? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You know, I can only think of one thing I like better than reading through your eyes and that would be looking into your eyes when we are together and seeing through them. This is as wonderful a write as is the person who wrote it and NO....it ain't cause I am biased at all. Well, maybe a bit but not in the poetry critique area. You get what you deserve and this is truely beautiful sweetheart. Love ya. Did I mention that the construction of this piece is superb and the use of metaphors is excellent and of course we all know you shine in the vocabulary always. Truely splendid writing. I have found in you ... a reflection of me ... and a path to the peace I have sought. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-20-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautifully written, enjoyed Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a fantastic piece of writing, Kris! Beautifully done! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
M: you are the sweetheart for your flattering compliments...  ...thank you, my darlin'...you know your thoughts mean the world to me...I'm happy you liked this...  shadow: thanks! glad you enjoyed! Denise: thank you so much, m'friend...I appreciate your kind reply! sp tried to write a letter |
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