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Maverick Wolf
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 94
Scandia, MN

0 posted 2001-08-08 11:35 PM



Welcome to Las Vegas
Lights, glitz, and excitement
You play the games
Little skill, mostly chance
If you win, you'll return
If you lose, you won't
You can lose it all
Or you can cash out early
You can't play forever
But you can stay a while
So roll the dice
Pull the handle
Pick your numbers
And let it ride
It's not about winning
There's nothing to lose
So enjoy it while it lasts
Welcome to Life

Yesterday's history, tomorrow's a mystery, and today is a gift.  That's why they call it the present.


© Copyright 2001 Jason Botterill - All Rights Reserved
SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
1 posted 2001-08-09 12:41 PM


Good imagery....you almost don't need the last line as the true meaning behind your poem seems to come through without!  Love the attitude behind this    as the old irish proverb goes, "live life, for you're a long time dead."
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Secret Whisper
Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass
2 posted 2001-08-20 01:24 AM


Welcome to Life... enjoy.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-08-21 09:09 PM


Hi Maverick Wolf,

This was great loved the imagery, wonderful,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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