Open Poetry #15 |
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Welcome to Las Vegas |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
Welcome to Las Vegas Lights, glitz, and excitement You play the games Little skill, mostly chance If you win, you'll return If you lose, you won't You can lose it all Or you can cash out early You can't play forever But you can stay a while So roll the dice Pull the handle Pick your numbers And let it ride It's not about winning There's nothing to lose So enjoy it while it lasts Welcome to Life Yesterday's history, tomorrow's a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why they call it the present. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Good imagery....you almost don't need the last line as the true meaning behind your poem seems to come through without! Love the attitude behind this ![]() ~Krista ![]() "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Welcome to Life... enjoy. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Maverick Wolf, This was great loved the imagery, wonderful, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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